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Eight Steps to Successful Business Writing

This is the most important advice we can give you:

People read business documents to get answers and find what they want.

They want to know how to do or get something, or what happens if they do not do something. They want to know why you are an organization they should deal with. Build your document around this simple desire ¾ answer your customers' wants. You know why you are writing, but do not assume they do. Think about questions they are likely to ask, then organize your thoughts accordingly. Begin with the question foremost on their mind: "What's in it for me?" Here is a summary of our upcoming e-book, Eight Steps to Successful Business Writing:


1. Objective Guide: Summarize your objective

As Stephen R. Covey says in his Seven Habits of Highly Effective People, "Begin with the end in mind." If you are not clear about what you want to accomplish, you will not accomplish it unless you are blessed with great luck. Before laying out the course on how to get there, think seriously about where "there" is, and why being "there" is important. Start writing it down – not neatly – just get your thoughts on paper.

When you know where you want to be, and why, write a clear and concise summary of your objective. This will be your Objective Guide for the rest of your writing. Print it out and have it before you as you begin the rest of your writing.

You can always add to or change your Objective Guide, but don't change directions without first considering it. If you still want to change directions, first modify your guide.

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2. Customer Guide: Know your customer

Learn as much as you reasonably can about your potential customers (readers). Who are they? How many are they? How will they benefit by this thing you want to do? Why might they want it? Why might they not want it? Write it down again not neatly – just get your thoughts on paper.

When you have written down who your potential customers are and the reasons they may or may not value what you want to provide, revise it into a clear and concise summary. Include potential customers, potential benefits, and the pros and cons of them actually wanting it. This will be your Customer Guide for the rest of your writing. Print it out and have it before you as you begin the rest of your writing.

You can always add to or change your Customer Guide, but, as with your Objective Guide, don't change directions without first considering it. If you still want to change directions, first modify this guide.

Your Objective and Customer Guides are your stabilizers. They keep you on a clear track to profits.

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3. Style Guide: Organize your thoughts

a) Make lists of your objective, strong persuaders, and information your customers should know about your product or service. Then organizing the information on the lists in order of importance and value.

b) Think about how you will deliver the message.  Is it a letter? A handout? An eBay or other auction ad? A Web page? An instruction sheet? If your message is anything beyond a one-page letter or a single sheet handout, you should discuss any special needs of printers and designers before going very far with your first draft.

c) Prepare your Style Guide or be ready to add to one you already have. When you introduce a new word, design, font, or any other aspect that will be repeated in your document, add it to your Style Guide. Overall consistency tells your readers you are on top of your subject. Like the guides, print your Style Guide and have it before you as you begin your writing. But unlike your Objective and Customer Guides, you will routinely add to it. If, however, you change or add a style, be sure to go back in your writing and update it to the current style.

Regarding word choice: choose common words over complex words or jargon. If you MUST use technical or complex words, define them. Avoid using so many technical words that your readers require a dictionary of terms. You will lose them. You are trying to show them the benefit of your idea, not the number of big words you know.

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4. Draft your message

a) Start writing. Expand on the listed items, just enough help make sense of them. Don’t worry about making your writing pretty. Ignore spelling, punctuation, and best grammar. Just get it on paper. Don't spend much time on something that no longer seems to fit, but don't eliminate it either. It may become important later on.

b) Begin organizing your material into a basic introduction, body, and close.

Introduction

Get to your point early. After reading the first few sentences, your reader should know why they should read your message. You want them to feel the importance of what you’ve written and to act now.

Body

Expand on critical issue, persuaders, and good to know information. Don’t ramble. Your objective in all business writing is to persuade readers to do something.

Close

Restate the importance of your message and how they can achieve the objective. Ask them to act.

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5. Edit your message

When you are editing, it is best to have someone else look at your writing. The best writers overlook their own mistakes. At a minimum, set the writing aside for a day before you start editing, and then do it in pieces. We use this general approach for all documents.

a) Review for intent. Look again at your Objective and Customer Guides. Did you cover critical elements?

b) Review for flow.

c) Review for consistency. (Remember your Style Guide?)

d) Review word selection. Would simpler words give the same meaning?

e) Review grammar.

f) Review for general look and feel.

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6. Design your final message

This can be a simple matter of putting it on your letterhead, or it could be time to turn it over to the designer or printer to build your final product. Once the design is complete, go through each of the edit steps once more to be sure nothing slipped and that nothing was overlooked. The carpenter’s rule says measure twice, cut once. That rule strongly applies here.

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7. Send your message

Deliver the message in the way you planned.

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8. Analyze your results

This important step is often overlooked. Whether this was a simple letter to a few customers or a major product affecting thousands of customers, it is important that you keep track of comments and results. Make a list of what worked and what didn’t. Use that list to modify your Style Guide so you'll be ready for your next project.

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Revised: March 30, 2011

 

 

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